I am happy I am alive
I can realize the importance of my life
Its never too late to connect to the vibe
I was lost some where in that night
I am happy I am alive
I made many mistakes and I am here
They could not see but it was layer over layer
Thanks for all the care
I am happy I am alive
I saw no one but the dark
I held no one but the marks
I leaner ed it was not an art
I am happy I am alive
My dreams were never this colorful
My sleep was never this peaceful
My life was never this meaningful
I am happy I am alive
I am close to the inner bliss
I am more like a careless dally
Soul also smile,I learned
I am happy I am alive
15 comments:
nice-1.. add some line from my side.. i m not a poet..i m techie kindda man.. i m just giving you some idea..
"i am happy with my loneliness.. i like to njoy my isolation .. so i am happy in isolation " i think u got the idea.. u can add this thought on ur blog
jus read the latest one.....
too many "I" makes u mean......try "we" in da nxt one....
amazing, keep it up.....
really liked the poem,u write well.
the content was gr8.....but was not rhyming well when read..
keep going!
http://ankit-myendeavour.blogspot.com
check mine in ur leisure...start from 5th post as i hve not posted lately
great poems
i like the newest of them
i also write poems but they are in hindi
below is my blog address
visit and see my poems
http://iamhereonlyforu.blogspot.com/
..and i am happy i am reading ur poems...hello..i've been following ur poems lately and i really think you haf put some good thought to pen des poems down...i enjoyed it...keep up da good job. bye!
that strikes a chord
good one...
nice one
really nice:) y don't u put a sharing mechanism like Tell-a-Friend so that visitor like us can easily share it with our frens thru mails,blogs,IMs,orkut,facebook, etc.U can register in www.socialtwist.com n make us share ur poems with our frens i.e.if u r willing to :)
nice poem chhavi.....u r a teacher and teachers can never be erratic.
keep writing...
nice yaar nice lines
keep writing
iam also write poems but in hindi
you can see my blog at this address:-
http://iamhereonlyforu.blogspot.com/
http://seemywords-chirag.blogspot.com/
my second blog " see my words " is my poem blog and above blog "iamhere.." is the general blog in which i put my daily life things
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