Wednesday, May 24, 2006

PLAIN STATE


I am at the edge,but I do not deserve the rest
Iam breatheless,but who am I to complain for mess
Its easy to stand tall he said,but I doubt at that gest
Day and night working for the best,but I see hell as my nest
I want to break all rules and lie at the holy rest
Abondon myself,can anyone hear my request?

4 comments:

Ankit said...

hey chhavi, i never knew u r such good poet, i never knew u had so much of pain inside u, tht u wrote such touching poems. i would like u 2 b a little bit of romantic as well in ur poems. cheers n carry on the good work

sanjul gupta said...

Mam,
this is sanjul you write really well. your poems are deep and show sadness.as you gave me the idea in kullu manali i have also posted my writings please do read them at sanjulgupta.blogspot.com

AADITYA said...

I must say...
Know Your 'SELF'...first...
without knowing who you are...the limitation exists..
the moment you know..the TRUE you...
You expereince the unLtd. U shining.

So what R U waiting 4...
break the limitations....take a you turn..Dive deep inside and search urself...
The search must not be outside..it must be inside...
WithIN you...not WithOUT

Share YourSelf..and Grow ur SELF

ruckfules said...

yea yea....... this sticks out loud....